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Woo Hoo!

Yazorz! I just noticed this! Much improved. It's not the kind of song that I usually listen to, but this is quite good :) It has great energy, and the flute is a great edition. It's hard to listen to without trying to picture the song in your mind, it would go great with a film, but not so well stand-alone. Congrats kjhf, you finally earned that 10 ;)

P.S. A Sadness. (final) is out! I changed the pan to separate the instruments.

kjhf responds:

Thanks. I basically spent the whole day on this. I hope it shows :/
Just reviewed your final Sadness piece. It's excellent :)
-kjhf

Nice

It's great, except it would be highly advisable to change the bass to something that doesn't sound like somebody stomping on the floor a bunch of times. Other than that, it's very nice and has a catchy beat :) That bass takes two points off of my rating and one off of my vote though :/

Nav responds:

Whaddya mean about the bass?!

Ugh

No offense, but don't make a drum loop again. EVER. That bone jarring thudududududududududududududuududud gave me a headache after 5 second. Blargh^2

hanorotu responds:

thank you i appreciate the review so i can improve

Congrats!

Congrats! Score ranked #40 and featured in a submission! It's a great song :) I don't really have any feedback to give on this...

kjhf responds:

Even I was surprised by the rank - 40th out of thousands!
I glad so many people like it.

Improved. Greatly.

I just saw the edit you made to your message. I like this one much better than the first. Personally, when I said bells I was invisioning something a little higher, but these work very well indeed. This is getting a 9!

kjhf responds:

Haha, don't worry - this is just a taster - I'm in the process of making The Secret Forest 3! Or 2... Meh I'll call it 2 since this is 1.5.
So far I've added a flute and bass (see comment below). Hope you vote 10 on that to continue the pattern ;)
-kjhf

Good Idea

It's a pretty good idea, but there is a lot of empty space in this song. It might be good for something soundtracky, but listening to this by itself, there needs to be another instrument. Also, you have fallen into the death trap of the unrealistic synth strings. Either give them some reverb or go for a cello. Another thing that might be good would be to have a high bell sound that his at certain points in the song, "dum dun dum dum dun, dum dun dun dun *tink*".

kjhf responds:

The empty space is intentional - It's held back, secret.
As for the instruments, I quite like the bell idea. Probably add reverb instead of changing the ready-made instruments because personally, I like the synth sounds.
Keep in touch. Chances are I'll make a second, and thanks for the detailed review :D

Edit: New one is made! http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/142273

Cubase :)

Yay for Cubase :) I use it sometimes, but I use Reason mostly.

SkyMarshall responds:

Cubase SX3 4 l1f3 :D
Thanks for the review, comrade )

Amazing

One of the bast D&B songs I have heard on newgrounds, this is simply amazing. There is no other way to pt it, and nothing more to be said. Except that the clicky noise gets annoying.

LiquidEcstacy responds:

I agree. I don't know what i was doing haha

Needs a Piano

After listening to the first 5 seconds, I thought that I was going to end up with some horrible drum-ish loop. This is actually pretty good. Very quaint, and the lyrics are nice too. Needs an unaltered piano.

pookicker responds:

I may go back and add a piano... but, I have a hard time with notes and chords because I can't really understand music. I have to play it back a thousand times using different strategies to get a sound.

Thanks for the appreciation.

Nice, Real Nice :)

This is great! I'm going to put it on my iPod ;) I have a bunch of music I want to upload, but I can't because I have Safari :(

Dj-Flux responds:

Get Firefox. =P

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